Thursday, 23 October 2014
Wednesday, 22 October 2014
Michael's Story
In class We've being doing buddy writing and this is a story made by Michael and hes seven yrs old and here is his story below.

The playground is coloured light blue like the sky. Its body was like a car driving down the road. The roof of the playground looks like a shed to me. The slide looks like a horseshoe as I go down it. The other slide is like a water slide. When I drink the water I am drinking nice, cold, healthy water.
The playground is coloured light blue like the sky. Its body was like a car driving down the road. The roof of the playground looks like a shed to me. The slide looks like a horseshoe as I go down it. The other slide is like a water slide. When I drink the water I am drinking nice, cold, healthy water.
Friday, 17 October 2014
Descriptive Writing
This term we are writing descriptive pieces. We are using Figurative language. Here is an example from an image I choose.
Flowers splash the scene as the spring sun arrives. Dolphins jump out of the waters happily as the sun comes around the corner. The crystal clear water sparkles in the sun. Bright sun turns yellow, brighter that lava. Dolphins wave hello as we pass by. Everyone who sees the sun know it was the start of a new beginning. Waters splash like the sound of drums.
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