Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Michael's Story

In class We've being doing buddy writing and this is a story made by Michael and hes seven yrs old and here is his story below.




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The playground is coloured light blue like the sky.  Its body was like a car driving down the road. The roof of the playground looks like a shed to me. The slide looks like a horseshoe as I go down it. The other slide is like a water slide. When I drink the water I am drinking nice, cold, healthy water.

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